LIVE! #58
3 March 2024

Agenda



  • Why We're Here

  • Literary Forensics
  •     - What do I bring?
  •     - What do I feel?
  •     - What do I notice?
  •     - What do I study?

  • Next Month's Reading & Study


Why We're Here

We Writers want to improve our craft

by Reading like a Writer

through Literary Forensics training

we learn from each other

Roundtable Rules

Always refer back to the book

We practice active listening & serendipity

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but not every conclusion

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Introductions

What do I bring
to this book?

Meet today's author: Eleanor Catton

  • Born in London, Ontario of an American father and New Zealander mother, Catton's family moved to New Zealand when Eleanor was 6.
  • Critical of the NZ government of PM Sir John Key, who reinstated peerages.
  • Lives in Cambridge, England, with her husband, poet Steven Toussaint.

  • Author of three novels: The Rehearsal (2008) 328 pp.;
    The Luminaries (2013) 853 pp. (Booker Prize); Birnam Wood (2023) 426 pp
  • Catton was the youngest ever Booker Prize winner at age 28.
  • Wrote the screenplay for the 2020 film Emma, starring Anya Taylor-Joy.

  • Catton writes in Microsoft Word, and in sequence, editing with her husband as she goes. She does not "draft".
  • Reads a lot of psychology before a writing project, to get into other situations and out of her own situation.
  • "I have very strong feelings about 1st and 3rd person. 1st person can be a trap; you are so close to the protagonist that other skills don't get pulled into play in the same way. 3rd person gives an author a better ability to control what to withhold or reveal." - Eleanor Catton
  • "Seldom, very seldom does complete truth belong to any human disclosure; seldom can it happen that something is not a little disguised, or a little mistaken; but where, as in this case, though the conduct is mistaken, the feelings are not, it may not be very material."

    - from Emma Ch. 49
       by Jane Austin

"What a form is is a question. It is the question that the book is asking. And that if a book feels formless, in my opinion, it's often that the writer doesn't know what questions they're asking, or even if they're asking a question at all. . . If you have a sense of the 'why', then the 'how' will take care of itself."
     - Eleanor Catton

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I feel?

What in the book elicited that feeling?

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but every conclusion should be questioned

We practice serendipity
- nothing is too crazy

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I notice?


  •    • Language and Grammar

  •    • Context

  •    • Point of view

  •    • Character & character development

  •    • Pacing

  •    • Horizontal structure

  •    • Layering of themes

  •    • Overall effect

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Writing Birnam Wood

  • First idea came from a writers residency in Amsterdam, NL, in 2015.
  • She lived above an English language bookstore featuring protest literature and activist manifestos. Tony emerged from the reading of 15 protest books.
  • Catton's two years of research before writing a word included family psychology. Lemoine emerged from researching psychopaths.

  • Form came first. She knew the final effect she wanted the reader to feel.
  • It took her around 30 attempts to write Page One.
  • Wrote from beginning to end, polishing as she went, never backtracking.
  • She believes that "through drafting often you can lose a sense of what the reader's experience is."
  • Catton's husband "has read every version of every chapter multiple times."
  • They argued a lot about the secne when Tony sees the guard pull a gun.

  • Catton sees Austin as Shakespeare's heir to Dramatic Irony.
  • Wanted this book to be a mash up of Emma and Macbeth.

  • Who represents Macbeth?
  • "I considered everybody for both manslaughter and murder, and for both victim and perpetrator." Each one of them could have been Macbeth.

"I wanted to see if I could emulate what [Jane Austin] had achieved in Emma formally. But rather than beginning in a satirical way and then bending it towards a comic form. . . I wanted to see if I could do that, but bend it towards a tragic form. . . I had this idea of fusing Macbeth and Emma."

Stats & Background

  • Marketing: Psychological Fiction, Literary Fiction, Suspense Thrillers
    Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Literary Fiction, Political Thrillers
  • Genre: Realistic Modern-Day Long-Form Archplot
  • Print Pages: 432; Word count: 138,221
    Reading Grade: 9th; Avg. wds/sent.: 16.36
    Lexical Density: 49.24; Flesch Reading Ease: 69.03

  • POV: Mira, Shelley, Tony, Lemoine, Owen & Jill Darvish, Rosie; Person: 3rd; Tense: Past

  • Publish date: March 7, 2023
  • Publisher: Farrar, Straus and Giroux
  • Audio book length: (12 hours 47 mins); Narr. Saskia Maarleveld

  • A Best Book of 2023: New York Times Book Review, NPR, New Yorker, Washington Post,
    The Atlantic, Time, Financial Times, Slate, The Chicago Public Library, Kirkus,
    The Telegraph, A Barack Obama Summer Reading Pick

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Next Podcast, March 24
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Thanks to: Boulder Writers Alliance

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Sleuthing!