LIVE! #58
3 March 2024

Agenda



  • Why We're Here / Roundtable Rules

  • Introduction to Literary Forensics

  • Group Discussion

  • Further Study


Why We're Here

We writers want to improve our craft
by reading like a writer

We learn from each other
using Literary Forensics

Roundtable Rules

Always refer back to the book

Practice active listening & serendipity

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but not every conclusion

Always refer back to the book

Reading Teaches Writing

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

Introductions

What do you bring
to this book?

Meet today's author: Eleanor Catton

  • Born in London, Ontario of an American father and New Zealander mother, Catton's family moved to New Zealand when Eleanor was 6.
  • Critical of the NZ government of PM Sir John Key, who reinstated peerages.
  • Lives in Cambridge, England, with her husband, poet Steven Toussaint.

  • Author of three novels: The Rehearsal (2008) 328 pp.;
    The Luminaries (2013) 853 pp. (Booker Prize); Birnam Wood (2023) 426 pp
  • Catton was the youngest ever Booker Prize winner at age 28.
  • Wrote the screenplay for the 2020 film Emma, starring Anya Taylor-Joy.

  • Catton writes in Microsoft Word, and in sequence, editing with her husband as she goes. She does not "draft".
  • Reads a lot of psychology before a writing project, to get into other situations and out of her own situation.
  • "I have very strong feelings about 1st and 3rd person. 1st person can be a trap; you are so close to the protagonist that other skills don't get pulled into play in the same way. 3rd person gives an author a better ability to control what to withhold or reveal." - Eleanor Catton
  • "Seldom, very seldom does complete truth belong to any human disclosure; seldom can it happen that something is not a little disguised, or a little mistaken; but where, as in this case, though the conduct is mistaken, the feelings are not, it may not be very material."

    - from Emma Ch. 49
       by Jane Austin

"What a form is is a question. It is the question that the book is asking. And that if a book feels formless, in my opinion, it's often that the writer doesn't know what questions they're asking, or even if they're asking a question at all. . . If you have a sense of the 'why', then the 'how' will take care of itself."
     - Eleanor Catton

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

What do you feel?

What in the book elicited that feeling?

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but every conclusion should be questioned

We practice serendipity
- nothing is too crazy

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

What do you notice?

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

Writing Birnam Wood

  • First idea came from a writers residency in Amsterdam, NL, in 2015.
  • She lived above an English language bookstore featuring protest literature and activist manifestos. Tony emerged from the reading of 15 protest books.
  • Catton's two years of research before writing a word included family psychology. Lemoine emerged from researching psychopaths.

  • Form came first. She knew the final effect she wanted the reader to feel.
  • It took her around 30 attempts to write Page One.
  • Wrote from beginning to end, polishing as she went, never backtracking.
  • She believes that "through drafting often you can lose a sense of what the reader's experience is."
  • Catton's husband "has read every version of every chapter multiple times."
  • They argued a lot about the secne when Tony sees the guard pull a gun.

  • Catton sees Austin as Shakespeare's heir to Dramatic Irony.
  • Wanted this book to be a mash up of Emma and Macbeth.

  • Who represents Macbeth?
  • "I considered everybody for both manslaughter and murder, and for both victim and perpetrator." Each one of them could have been Macbeth.

"I wanted to see if I could emulate what [Jane Austin] had achieved in Emma formally. But rather than beginning in a satirical way and then bending it towards a comic form. . . I wanted to see if I could do that, but bend it towards a tragic form. . . I had this idea of fusing Macbeth and Emma."

Stats & Background

  • Marketing: Psychological Fiction, Literary Fiction, Suspense Thrillers
    Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Literary Fiction, Political Thrillers
  • Genre: Realistic Modern-Day Long-Form Archplot
  • Print Pages: 432; Word count: 138,221
    Reading Grade: 9th; Avg. wds/sent.: 16.36
    Lexical Density: 49.24; Flesch Reading Ease: 69.03

  • POV: Mira, Shelley, Tony, Lemoine, Owen & Jill Darvish, Rosie; Person: 3rd; Tense: Past

  • Publish date: March 7, 2023
  • Publisher: Farrar, Straus and Giroux
  • Audio book length: (12 hours 47 mins); Narr. Saskia Maarleveld

  • A Best Book of 2023: New York Times Book Review, NPR, New Yorker, Washington Post,
    The Atlantic, Time, Financial Times, Slate, The Chicago Public Library, Kirkus,
    The Telegraph, A Barack Obama Summer Reading Pick

Literary Forensics

 

What you bring

What you feel

What you notice

What you study

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Thanks to: Boulder Writers Alliance

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Happy Reading
and
Happy Writing!