LIVE! #56
7 January 2024

Agenda



  • Why We're Here

  • Literary Forensics
  •     - What do I bring?
  •     - What do I feel?
  •     - What do I notice?
  •     - What do I study?

  • Next Month's Reading & Study


Why We're Here

We Writers want to improve our craft

by Reading like a Writer

through Literary Forensics training

we learn from each other

Roundtable Rules

Always refer back to the book

We practice active listening & serendipity

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but not every conclusion

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Introductions

What do I bring
to this book?

Meet today's author: Bonnie Garmus

  • Born in Riverside, California, Garmus grew up in Seattle.
  • She received her bachelors degree in creative writing/aesthetic studies
    from UC Santa Cruz
  • She has worked as a copywriter and creative director in the US,
    and has lived in Switzerland and Colombia.
  • Garmus is married, with two daughters, and has lived in London with her husband and her dog, 99, for the past 6 years.
  • She enjoys open water swimming and has rowed competitively.

  • Lessons in Chemistry is Garmus's first published novel.
  • To date it has been translated into 42 languages and remains a best seller.
    It was released in April, 2022, two weeks before her 65th birthday.

“The truth is, Elizabeth Zott is based on the fundamentals of Stoicism as written by Marcus Aurelius, which are: self-responsibility, and courage, and logic, and bravery. And that is her.”
     - Bonnie Garmus

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I feel?

What in the book elicited that feeling?

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but every conclusion should be questioned

We practice serendipity
- nothing is too crazy

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I notice?


  •    • Language and Grammar

  •    • Context

  •    • Point of view

  •    • Character & character development

  •    • Pacing

  •    • Horizontal structure

  •    • Layering of themes

  •    • Overall effect

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Writing Lessons in Chemistry

  • First novel (still unpublished) was 700 pages long and rejected by 98 agents.
  • Began by writing a second novel about Mad Zott.

  • Immediately after a bad work meeting that involved 10 men ignoring her ideas,
    she wrote the the entire first chapter, and the final three sentences,
    of a new novel about Mad's mother, Elizabeth.
  • She wanted Elizabeth to have a platform, on TV, that wasn't merely ornamental.
  • As a TV chemist, Zott had to be attractive. 2 options: game show or cooking.
  • Garmus studied 1950s chemistry textbook: fire dept called twice.

  • During 5 years of writing Lessons, Garmus failed a class called
    Finish Your Novel.
  • She then took a writing class at Curtis Brown and met her agent, Felicity Blunt,
    at a cocktail party, who signed her to a deal on the strength of her first 10,000 words.
  • Garmus never had to query Lessons--not once.

  • Garmus did not write to an outline, but after her first burst of writing she did have the
    beginning and the end, "only needing to write the other 90,000 words".

Stats & Background

  • Marketing: Humorous Fiction, Mothers & Children Fiction, Literary Fiction
  • Genre: Realistic Historical Long-Form Archplot
  • Print Pages: 400; Word count: 109,096; Reading Grade: 7th
    Avg. wds/sent.: 9.53; Lexical Density: 50.30; Flesch Reading Ease: 72.07

  • POV: Omniscient (Garmus says 10 POVs--I counted 25)
    Person: 3rd; Tense: Past

  • Publish date: April 5, 2022
  • Publisher: Doubleday
  • Audio book length: (11 hours 55 mins); Narr. Bonnie Garmus, Miranda Raison, Pandora Sykes

  • 2022 Book of the Year: British Book Awards, Hay Festival, Barnes & Noble, Waterstones
  • Notable books of 2022: NYT, NPR, Goodreads, Amazon
  • Streaming: Limited series on AppleTV

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Next Podcast, January 28: Avalon - Nell Zink

https://WritersWhoRead.com/live

February 4: Victory City - Salman Rushdie (UK, 2023)
March 3: Birnam Wood - Eleanor Catton (NZ, 2023)
April 7: Romantic Comedy - Curtis Sittenfeld (USA, 2023)
May 5: Yellowface - R. F. Kuang (USA, 2023)
June 2: Mr. Texas - Lawrence Wright (USA, 2023)

Thanks to: Boulder Writers Alliance

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Happy
Sleuthing!