LIVE! #48
5 March 2023

Agenda



  • Why We're Here

  • Literary Forensics
  •     - What do I bring?
  •     - What do I feel?
  •     - What do I notice?
  •     - What do I study?

  • Next Month's Reading & Study


Why We're Here

We Writers want to improve our craft

by Reading like a Writer

through Literary Forensics training

we learn from each other

Roundtable Rules

Always refer back to the book

We practice active listening & serendipity

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but not every conclusion

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Introductions

What do I bring
to this book?

Meet today's author: Dan Fesperman

  • Former foreign correspondant for The Baltimore Sun
  • Assignments included: Germany, Bosnia, Afghanistan, Pakistan and the Middle East

  • Author of 13 spy thrillers
  • Awards include:
  •     1999 The John Creasey Memorial Dagger Award for best first novel
  •     2003 The Ian Fleming Steel Dagger for best thriller
  •     2006 The Hammett Prize

  • Lives in Baltimore, Maryland with his wife Liz Bowie, a reporter for The Baltimore Sun, and their two children

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Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I feel?

What in the book elicited that feeling?

Every feeling and observation is valid...
but every conclusion should be questioned

We practice serendipity
- nothing is too crazy

Always refer back to the book

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

What do I notice?


  •    • Language and Grammar

  •    • Context

  •    • Point of view

  •    • Character & character development

  •    • Pacing

  •    • Horizontal structure

  •    • Layering of themes

  •    • Overall effect

Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Writing Winter Work

  • Learned of Operation Rosenholz years after the fact
  • Took advantage of classified nature to fill in the gaps

  • Read Markus Wolf's memoir, The Man Without a Face and his cookbook
  • - Wolf was John le Carré's inspiration for his Soviet spymaster, Karla
  • Read The Main Enemy by Milt Bearden and James Risen
  • Consulted fellow author Bill Rapp, who worked for CIA Berlin at that time

  • Reworked some of the spy stories told to him by readers of his previous novels
  • Grimm's name and foreboding forest inspired by Brothers Grimm fairy tales

  • Wanted Grimm to confront his past: Magda Holbein incident
  • Has used Claire in four novels; historically this is 2/4; next up The Cover Wife

Stats & Background

  • Marketing: Espionage Thrillers, Suspense Thrillers, Suspense, Genre Literature & Fiction
  • Genre: Realistic Historical Arch-Plot Long-Form
  • Print Pages: 352; Word count: 108,005
  • Reading Grade: 7th-8th; Avg. wds/sent.: 12.1
  • Lexical Density: 45.74; Flesch Reading Ease: 72.46

  • POV: Emil, Claire, Karola, Baucom, Dorn; Person: 3rd; Tense: Past

  • Publish date: July 12, 2022
  • Publisher: Knopf, Random House
  • Audio book narr.: Dan Fesperman (11 hours 51 minutes)
  • Recognition: Amazon's Best Mysteries and Thrillers of 2022, Amazon Editor's Choice, Oprah Daily's Favorite Books of 2022
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Literary Forensics

 

What do I bring?

What do I feel?

What do I notice?

What do I study?

Writers Who Read: Up Next

April 2: The Candy House – Jennifer Egan (USA, 2022)

Required reading: Language and Grammar


Writers Who Read: Coming Up

May 7: Sea of Tranquility – Emily St. John Mandel (USA, 2022)
June 4: The Passenger – Cormac McCarthy (USA, 2022)
- Summer Break -
September 3: Stella Maris – Cormac McCarthy (USA, 2022)
October 1: Avalon – Nell Zink (USA, 2022)
November 5: Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow – Gabrielle Zevin (USA, 2022)

Thanks to: Boulder Writers Alliance

Contact Gary: hello@garyalanmcbride.com
Literary Forensics Resources

Happy
Sleuthing!